Saturday, July 16, 2005

His Turn

I posted a poem in Thoughts in Verses. This is where i store my poems - the whispers of my soul.

The poem was a creation by (Lord) Daryl, my son (he chuckled as I address him this). My son is fond of fantasy stories. He loves The Lord of the Rings, which is the greatest fantasy book ever written by a human, according to him. He thinks that the story is very well-written that it is light years away from Harry Potter. And because of this, he is also fond of writing stories which he does not finish. Well, I told him not to force himself to write. He should write when he feels like it.

There is a story which he got inspired to write a poem. Though he had not finished it yet, this poem was a part of the story.

The Search

(This is a poem uttered by Lord Aldeni. For he is searching for his beloved,the fair Treira Vande who has been lost in the lands east of the Windy Mountains.)

I search for the gift that I have lost
Afraid it might have turned to dust
I roam the broad lands, vast and great
My heart - afraid - that I'm too late

I yearn in my heart so greatly
To find it I shall be happy
Yet if lost forever, oh no!
My heart will lose remaining glow

I roam the earth from north to south
And I walk here and there and about
I roam the world from east to west
Even though I will get no long rest

Til I find this gift I search for
I shall endure darkness and gore
Through the heavens, I'll fly the dove
All I'll do - to find my lost love

Daryl is 12 years old, a second year HS student. He is still a child in manners but talks and discusses like an experienced adult. One of his questions I cannot forget and which was unexpected - "Ma, do you think VAT can help?" I went like, "Whaa...t?" I explained it to him and he was so interested - I really never expected it from him.

15 comments:

  1. Wow! LOTR fan and poet at such a young age? he rocks, ma'am, i tell you. :D good luck to him in his endeavors. (hehe...here's a fantasy addict, too.)

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  2. He is already an addict, Corsi! Sometimes i go like, "LOTR again, di ka pa ba nagsasawa??" and he can even verbalize the lines. if that is what addiction is, he is.

    he surfs the net, too, for LOTR sites.

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  3. 12 years old? that's a helluva poem! very impressive. yung daughter ko 14. pwede na rin di ba, balae? hahaha

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  4. hi, evi! thank you.

    daryl jules is not that studious type. and i am really a fan of him when he discusses things. he brings home news that he got a perfect score in a quiz not having to see him review.

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  5. ha ha si Ka Uro! pwede! di ba age doesnt matter? ang problema e, pagkaganda yata ng iyong dawter. baka hindi mapansin si Daryl. and it'll really be up to them. ha ha

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  6. You have really talented kids. I would be so proud of my kids if they could write that well. And they're so young too!

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  7. hi, mikey!

    they are really talented, i agree, but they are assertive, too, that sometimes i am at a loss for words. 'just hope that they will keep a level head at all times.

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  8. a great poet in the making. watch out! congrats to you proud mom.

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  9. hi, abaniko. nice pseudonym. thanks. hope he will be GREAT.

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  10. hello, lws! long see no time he he nasa right ang aking tagboard, nawawala ba??? maybe when you visited, down sya. ang init nga raw dyan, sabe ng friend kong 'merican. dito, me typhoon pero umalis na yata.

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  11. Bing, you have two talented children who have a lot to say and know exactly how to say it.

    Kudos to you and their Papsie!

    Concidentally, I was just about to come out with quotes from my super-kulit kids as my next post!

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  12. Thanks, Renee. When things doesnt seem to be what you wanted to be and the world seems not a nice place to live in, i just ponder on how blessed i am to have my family - papsie and the kids. and i say to myself, God is a wonderful God to give me such inspiration to go on with this life.

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  13. Thanks, Renee. When things doesnt seem to be what you wanted to be and the world seems not a nice place to live in, i just ponder on how blessed i am to have my family - papsie and the kids. and i say to myself, God is a wonderful God to give me such inspiration to go on with this life.

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